Isaiah Swann
Ms. Thompson
AP Lang, Block 1, Skinny B
6 May 2015
DAP for “Letter from Birmingham Jail"
“'Letter from Birmingham Jail' Timed Response” was written in response to a prompt concerning Martin Luther King's essay, "Letter from Birmingham Jail," an essay which addressed multiple white Alabaman clergymen and asked them for their support regarding the Civil Rights movement and protests within Alabama. This was an incredible and moving essay written by Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. The prompt centered around either supporting or disputing the idea that groups cause more trouble than individuals. In totality,
On one hand, my response had many strengths. For one, I offered many points that were well thoughtout and qualified. Moreover, I provided incessant commentary, support, and explanation for each qualification that I provided. On the other hand, however, there were many opportunities for improvement. I lacked a strong and effectual conclusion, as well as specific examples that referred back to the prompt. These negative items, in combination, contributed to an overall negative effect on my timed response and made the paper less than stellar.
Ms. Thompson
AP Lang, Block 1, Skinny B
6 May 2015
DAP for “Letter from Birmingham Jail"
“'Letter from Birmingham Jail' Timed Response” was written in response to a prompt concerning Martin Luther King's essay, "Letter from Birmingham Jail," an essay which addressed multiple white Alabaman clergymen and asked them for their support regarding the Civil Rights movement and protests within Alabama. This was an incredible and moving essay written by Dr. Martin Luther King Jr. The prompt centered around either supporting or disputing the idea that groups cause more trouble than individuals. In totality,
On one hand, my response had many strengths. For one, I offered many points that were well thoughtout and qualified. Moreover, I provided incessant commentary, support, and explanation for each qualification that I provided. On the other hand, however, there were many opportunities for improvement. I lacked a strong and effectual conclusion, as well as specific examples that referred back to the prompt. These negative items, in combination, contributed to an overall negative effect on my timed response and made the paper less than stellar.